gentlemen,
i wish to apply for the position of a salesman advertised by you in . i am 20 years of age and speak english, mandarin, cantonese and shanghaiese. aside from language advantages, i am also quite acquainted with many local soap retailers. if employed by your firm, i am sure that i shall be able to sell more soap for your firm. i have business knowledge and know the sales techniques. i know i would like my job if i am employed.
as regards salary, i would be glad to start at hk$3,000 per month plus commission. reference may be furnished if it is required.
yours faithful
先生们,
我想应聘贵公司招聘的广告员的职位。我今年20岁,说英语,普通话,广东话和上海。除了语言方面的优势外,我对当地许多肥皂零售商也很熟悉。如果贵公司录用,我相信我将能为贵公司销售更多的肥皂。我有业务知识,了解销售技巧。我知道如果我被录用,我会喜欢我的工作。
至于月薪一事,希望能有3000港币作为起薪,外加佣金。如需个人资料,可随时提供。
你的忠实的